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【雅思真题解析】7月19日雅思考试解析：写作（含两篇范文）

Task1原题重现:
 

The picture below shows the recycling process of wasted glass bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
 

说明：本场考试实际为废旧电池回收利用流程图，题为the picture below shows the process of old batteries turning to new batteries and useful products.因没有回忆出图形，故选用玻璃回收利用流程图加以说明(真题：2009年9月26日，2008年2月14日，2006年1月14日)
 

考情分析及展望:
 

截至本场考试为止，在本年度已结束的27场考试里，数据图出现频率从高到低分别为柱状图(6次)、线图(5次)、表格(4次)、饼图(1次)流程图(5场)和地图题(3场)，剩下的为多图写作。与2013年上半年的同期相比，饼图考查次数略有减少(3次减少为1次，地图的出现频率大幅增长(1次增长到5 次)，与往年地图流程出现的侧重不一样，今年对流程和地图题的考查次数明显增多，需要引起重视。
 

参考范文:
 

The flowchart illustrates the production of glass by recycling wasted glass bottles.
 

There are altogether three stages in the recycling process.At the first stage,wasted glass bottles are gathered in the collection point and transported for further process by truck. At the next stage,those wasted glass bottles are washed in high-pressure water. After the cleaning,bottles are divided in terms of their colors,and the normal classifications include clear,green and brown.The bottles in the same colors are sent to a glass factory and broken into glass pieces.Later,the pieces are burned in fire at the temperature of 600℃-800℃ in furnaces. After being burned,the pieces are changed into liquid.And then,both of the recycled liquid glass and the new liquid glass from other sources are shaped in glass moulds to produce new bottles.At the final stage,the new glass bottles are used to contain products ready for sale in the supermarkets.
 

To sum up,the recycling process of glass bottles are quite complicated.However,it's definitely necessary as it is essential for environment protection.
 

(Words: 180)
 

Task2原题重现:
 

The government has the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individuals' responsibility.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
 

题型类别:双边讨论(议论类)
 

考情分析及展望:
 

根据针对今年话题作文考试统计，在26场考试中，社会类话题已经出现13次，教育类6次。考查的提问方式包括说明文3次，剩下议论文(同意与否11次，利弊分析7次，双边讨论5次)对于政府职责类的考题，建议考生准备关于政府职能方面的公共素材(例如政府在法律法规制定，资金调用等等方面的优势)，以便进行拆迁组合到考题中，在写作反预测的大背景下尤其适用。
 

参考思路(双边均衡再给出自己观点):
 

开头段：Healthy diet的定义分解： 1)蔬菜肉制品等食品安全 2)良好的饮食习惯
 

支持政府职责说：

1 加强食品安全监督，必要时使用特有的法律干预，严惩无良商家;

2 依靠科技，减少农作物对农药等化学物质的依赖;

3 宣扬全民养成健康饮食好习惯。
 

支持个人责任说：

1 高热量食物,不健康的生活方式导致肥胖症等人数激增，应改变这些不良习惯;

2 有权益反馈和检举食品安全。
 

参考范文:

Fast food has come under fire over the past decade,following people's pursuit of healthy diet. In a narrow sense,a healthy diet means the rice,vegetablesare free from the pollution by poisons,such as pesticide,herbicideor heavy metal and the meat consumed does not include antibiotics or hormone.In a broader sense, a healthy diet put emphasis on eating more vegetables and fruits,but lessfattyfood.To ensure citizens have a healthy diet,both government and individuals have responsibility.
 

Those advocating that it is government's obligation to ensure healthy diet claim that government have overwhelming superiority in intensifying the supervision to the food safety and increasing penalties against immoral manufacturers.For example, the nerves of consumers are badly rattled today after a toxic baby milk scandal. Government, after having a probe into all baby milk powders,should arrest those milk dealers since hundreds of children were diagnosed with kidney stones and even died.In this case, never can these illegal dealers be kept in check without the yoke of laws issued and staged by government. Another justification is that government can subsidize some agricultural projects which are aimed at reducing crops' reliance on pesticide.Last but not the least, government can also offer people intensive lifestyle education.
 

However, proceeding from the narrow sense of healthy diet, it mainly depends on individual's choice of lifestyle. Large amount of dietary energy intake form animal sources,reduced levels of physical activity and increased sedentary lifestyles all contribute to the growing number of food-related chronic diseases and obesity. Aware of this, individual must take steps to prevent this problem becoming larger still.In addition, yoke of opinions is also of paramount importance for government to supervise food security.
 

On the basis of the above-mentioned arguments,only by joining the efforts of government and individual can citizen's healthy diet be ensured,whether from the narrow sense or broader sense.
 

词汇拓展:

rest on=hinge on=depend on=rely on= count on 依赖

keep…in check 遏制

herbicide 除草剂

antibiotics 抗生素

hormone 激素

immoral=unethical 不道德的

sedentary lifestyle 久坐的生活方式

chronic disease 慢性疾病

obesity 肥胖

yoke of opinions 舆论压力
 

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